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ith hope after receiving the aid) and its object (the tenants of the hotel) to stray too far apart, thus leading to confusion regrading the true object of the modifying participle phrase. If we are to rewrite this sentence correctly, we need to move the modifier next to the appropriate word:

「接受援助后充满希望」是当作形容词使用的分词词组，意指一个人或一群人「充满希望」。然而，紧接着词组之后的是名词「志工」，这就是我们所说的修饰语错置，因为「接受援助后充满希望」的人并非志工而是「饭店的房客」。之所以会发生这种混淆，是因为作者让修饰语（接受援助后充满希望）与要描述的对象（饭店的房客）距离太远，从而导致分词词组修饰了错误对象的混乱句型。如果我们要重新将句子改写正确，需要将修饰语移动至适切的字词旁边。 

Filled with hope after receiving the aid, the tenants will perhaps one day join the ranks of the volunteers and work to help others in need. 
房客在接受援助后充满希望，期待有一天能加入志工的行列，以实际行动帮助有需要的人。

And remember that a participle phrase can come after the word it modifies:
请记住分词词组也可以跟在想要修饰的字词后面：

The volunteers hope that one day the tenets, filled with hope after receiving the aid, will join their ranks and work to help others in need.
志工期待有一天接受援助后充满希望的房客能加入他们的行列，以实际行动帮助有需要的人。

A quick look at our second sentence shows us a similar problem: 
类似的问题出现在第二句话，让我们快速浏览一下：

Since joining the WHO, many medical supplies could now be imported to Taiwan.
许多医疗用品自从加入世界卫生组织后，都可以进口到台湾了。 

We have the participle phrase “since joining the WHO” which is mistakenly modifying the word “medical supplies” instead of Taiwan. After all, it is Taiwan that joined the WHO, not the medical supplies! So, like with our first sentence, we need to bring the modifier and the word it describes closer together:
此句的分词词组「自从加入世界卫生组织后」，原本应指台湾却错误修饰了「医疗用品」。毕竟，加入世界卫生组织的是台湾而非医疗用品！如同第一个例句所示范的，我们必须将修饰语和描述的字词放在一起：

Since joining the WHO, Taiwan now imports many medical supplies.
台湾自从加入世界卫生组织后，可以进口许多医疗用品了。

As for our third sentence, I will leave it to our readers. Just follow the above two examples and you should have no problem. 
至于第三句，就让我留给各位读者吧。只要按照上面两个例子作更改，相信您一定可以改得更加通顺且正确。

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