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问题在于，当作者在后面接着写「因为所有希望这些物资能尽快送到幸存者的手中」。「所有」是用来当作句子主词的不特定代名词；然而，由于作者已在前一句使用被动语态，此时句中的主词未知。但后一句写出「所有」这个不定代名词，反而会让读者不知「all」是指谁而感到模糊不清。为了避免这个状况，将句子改成主动语态似乎是我们最好的选择。下面是一些建议的写法：

1a)The church mobilized hundreds of volunteers this morning to assist with the loading; it hopes the supplies may reach the hands of the survivors as soon as possible.

1a) 教会今天早上动员了数百名志工去协助装载补给品；它希望这些物资能尽快送到幸存者的手中。

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1b)Hundreds of volunteers mobilized this morning to assist with the loading, all in the hopes that the supplies may reach the hands of the survivors as soon as possible.
主词动词受词
1b)数百名志工今天早上动员起来去协助装载补给品，所有人都希望这些物资能尽快送到幸存者的手中。

Now our second example:
现在让我们看看第二个例句：

2)With the assistance of countries across the globe, it is hoped that Nepal and its citizen can regain the strength to face the long road to recovery.
因为有来自全球各地的援助，它希望尼泊尔和其人民能够重新获得力量去面对漫长的复苏之路。

Once again the passive voice here is not wrong, simply awkward. If, in the preceding sentence, the author made clear who is it that “hopes”, then our example might stand as it is. However, I believe this sentence would be considerably strengthened by changing it to the active voice. One example:
再一次强调，被动语态在这里并没有错，只是显得尴尬不合适。若作者在前一句明确写出是谁「希望」，那么例句句义的呈现会更加完整。然而，我认为此句使用主动式才能更加重句子的语气。例如：

2a)With the assistance of countries across the globe, charity organizations hope that Nepal and its citizens can regain the strength to face the long road to recovery.
因为有来自全球各地的援助，慈善机构希望尼泊尔和其人民能够重新获得力量去面对漫长的复苏之路。

In conclusion, when using passive voice it is important to ask yourself if your sentence is adequately clear. Sometimes we don’t care about the actor of a sentence, or perhaps the actor can be inferred from context, in situations like this the passive voice can be more direct and clear. However, when in doubt stick to the active voice. Your readers will thank you.
总而言之，当使用被动语态时，请问问自己句子是否表达得够清楚。有时候我们不在乎句子的行为者，或是从文中就能推测出行为者是谁，诸如这些前提下，那么可以使用被动语态让句子更直接和明确。然而，每当感到不确定时，就使用主动语态吧。相信您的读者会感谢您。