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论文作者:留学生论文论文属性:建议书 proposal登出时间:2013-11-21编辑:anne点击率:14172
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关键词:迪肯大学proposalRESEARCH PROPOSALRESEARCH ESSAY INSTRUCTIONS
摘要:Please read and follow these instructions carefully. Best viewed first on-screen for the colours, then print out. Suggestions to help improve the instructions and the form are welcome.
My feedback:
Hi Matthew,
My feedback is in the text where [*** ] appears and yellow highlighting. Where a word or phrase needs adjusting I have turned it into red text or crossed it out. You will see there are some useful parts and some that need modifying. Re-read the general instructions on the document on the DSO site as several points apply to your Proposal.
You have put in a commendable effort and have some good ideas, however you must think clearly about how to use your unit readings to analyze your topic. Include ACM701 theoretical ideas and research findings. Think “ACM701 Essay” rather than ‘research’. You also need to think and write in terms of either ideological textual analysis or discourse analysis.
This is only a short research essay using unit materials, 12 weeks long. It is not major study.
Currently your project is too ambitious, a great deal larger than it needs to be. Qualitative research in Media and Communications often uses only a single example or a few examples. Specify your medium (singular). The topic and the claims you are suggesting need to be considerably reduced and limited and more modest. Find which media and be very narrow in your focus (e.g. just one/two programmes on one TV station or say five/six reports in two newspapers is ok.) This cannot be a big empirical study or a “series of case studies”. You can use other people’s work to expand your materials. Also, focus more on the explanatory framework you will use, e.g. critical textual analysis, discourse analysis, semiotics. Might be a good time to review the original instructions.
Don’t be discouraged at the prospect of a reduction in scope and refocusing as much of what you have done will form useful background. Right now you have been doing too much specific independent research instead of thinking about how concepts taken from ACM701 unit readings can apply. You are not using enough unit materials. This is a common mistake. See the notes in your text. You can easily get on track with some adjustments.
Hope this helps,
Lynne
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