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general impression in both China andAmericaBecausethey are two typical countries of Easternand Western culture.(连续不断的句子Run-On Sentence)正确应为:Here I’d like to numerate some of the majordifferences to give you a general impression in both china andAmerica, because they are two typical countries of Easternand Western culture.
3、His words made all the people in the room laughwhich seemed somewhat reasonable.(错置修饰语MisplacedModifier)正确应为:His words which seemed somewhat reason-able made all the people in the room laugh.
4、And women can still go to work instead of staying athome andlookafter their children and their husbands all thetime even though they got married.(错误的平行结构FaultyParallelism)正确应为:And women can still go to work instead ofstaying at home and looking after their children and theirhusbands all the time even though they got married.
所举的都是学生作文中典型的错误,而由于学生粗心大意或水平不够,语法基础不扎实,无法确切表达,结果写出来的句子错了。这里既有受汉语的影响,因为他们习惯用中文的表达习惯来组织句子,也与他们缺乏经常的写作练习有关。教师在教学中应着重强调英语的曲折变化和汉语的无曲折变化方面的差异,加强对学生语法概念的灌输,加强对学生改正错句方面的训练,多让学生运用所学的英语知识来表达自己的思想,在练习中发现错误,在实践中促进英语写作水平的提高。

 

(3)英汉文章谋篇布局的差异对大学英文写作的影响

 

中国人与英美人思维习惯截然不同:东方人含而不露,他们的思维方式呈螺旋型(Circular)特征,而包括英美人在内的西方人坦率真诚,他们的思维方式呈直线型特征(Linear)。表达方式是人类思维方式的一种主要表现手段,而篇章则是表达方式的一种直接形式。所谓篇章是指整段或整篇文章,是书面交际中的对象和理想单位。就文章的生成,即谋篇,英汉有许多共同点。如开篇、承接、收尾,大致一致。但也有许多的不同处。调查显示英文写作总体呈直线型,即每段只阐述一个观点,与之无关的内容一概不要。英文写作多一开头就鲜明地提出观点即主题句(Topic Sentence),随之一系列支持句(Supporting Sen-tences)围绕主题句展开。请看下面的一篇短文。
(1) https://www.51lunwen.org/zhixiwenhuachayi/I feel quite confident about the math test that isscheduled for tomorrow. (2)The instructor has told us exact-ly what to study and my grades on housework have beengood. (3)In fact, I suppose math has always been one of thesubjects that I enjoy the most.(4) I have already spent twohours reviewing pages 115-140.(5) Tonight Susan and Iwill devote another hour or two to practicing with some of thesample problems.(6) Then I’ll be ready.
很明显,这一段的第(1)句为主题句,即“我本论文由英语论文网提供整理，提供论文代写，英语论文代写，代写论文，代写英语论文，代写留学生论文，代写英文论文，留学生论文代写相关核心关键词搜索。