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Extract 1(topic 1, A1's composition)

Before correction:

She and I are very different but we got on well together. She is short and I'm tall. She likes stay at home and watch television with my parents's.

A2: Ok. Sentence 1 is ok. In sentence 2, you should use get, not got, simple present. Next sentences let me see, here, like add v-ing not bare verb. My parents's, I don't know my parents's here mean, without possessive mark is correct. Do you agree?

A1: Yeah of course

After correction:

She and I are very different but we get on well together…. She is shorter than me….. She likes staying at home and watching television with my parents...

Extract 2 (topic 1, A2's composition)

Before correction:

My young brother is a 15 year old and I am 20 year old. My brother learn at Song Cong town and I learn at TN college of education.

A1: My young brother is a 15 year old. You don't need an article here, it is not a noun and years, not year. It's plural. My brother learn at Song Cong town and I learn at TN college of education, wrong form of the verb the third singular person.

A2: Okie. Learns not learn

After correction:

My young brother is 15 years old and I am 20 years old. He learns at Song Cong town and I learn at TN college of education.

Extract 3 (topic 2, A1's composition)

Before correction:

I was born in a family of farmer. My parents are workers in a company and my brother is married and works for the post office.

A2: I don't understand the next sentences. I was born in a family of farmer. My parents are workers in a company. Why?

A1: Oh, so so sorry, I mean classes in society. But I can't express this idea.

A2: Working class, you mean? Or you will not ? sentence. Are you clear? Now, next, any brother is married, was, not is and works for the post office.

After correction:

My parents are workers in a company and my brother is married and works for the post office.

Extract 4 (topic 2, A2's composition)

Before correction:

It's verry wonderful.

A1: Verry? Wrong spelling. It's Very. Can you find out the sentence?

A2: Yes. That's right.

After correction:

It's very wonderful!

Extract 5 (topic 2, A2's composition)

Before correction:

I am looking forwalk to learning from you.

Write soon!

A2:… And the last sentence, forwark, what do you mean? Forward, you mean that, wrong word.

Learning what here? I think it's hearing.

A1: Yes. That's terrible.

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