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试改译: The sea water around Hainan Islandenjoys an annual temperature of26℃and a visibilityof over 10 meters. W ith god-blessed tourism re-sources, Hainan wins the reputation of "a paradisefor vacationers and scuba-divers".

例3　原文:阳光扑面、椰风习习,放眼便是碧蓝海景,延绵沙滩。海南岛凭借热带海洋性气候、绚丽海岛风光、四季瓜果飘香等优势吸引着许多异地购房者倾慕而来。

原译: Pleasant sunshine, gentle sea breeze,full eyes of azure water and blue sky and elegantlystretching sandy beaches arewhatHainan has to of-fer. Relying on particular tropical climate, brilliantisland scenes and all-season fruits, house-buyersfrom alldirections are being increasingly attracted toHainan.

分析:⑴汉语是排比结构,英文也可用相应结构;⑵后一句用了合并法,但逻辑不清,Relyingon的逻辑主语不是house-buyers,而是海南岛;⑶“海岛风光”是整体景色,为集合名词,用scen-ery更合适;⑷目前已有多国人士来海南购房安家, home可涵盖各类房屋并更显温馨,故“异地购房者”可译为home - buyers from all over theworld.

试改译:Pleasantsunshine, gentle breeze, daz-zling seascapes and rolling beaches arewhatHainancan offer. W ith comfortable tropical climate, islandscenery and delicious fruits found in any season,Hainan has attracted an increasing number of home-buyers from all over theworld.

例4　原文:海南是中国唯一的热带海岛省份,长夏无冬,年平均气温23. 8℃,海南岛是陆地面积仅次于台湾的中国第二大岛,全省陆地面积3. 5万平方公里,辖海域面积200万平方公里,人口820多万,省会在海口, 1999年海南建设中国第一个生态省份,海南自然环境一流,旅游度假资源得天独厚,被国内外旅游者誉为健康岛、生态岛、安全岛、度假岛。

原译文: Being the only tropical island-basedprovince of china, Hainan features a summer-likeclimate all the year aroundwith an average tempera-ture of23, 80C. Hainan is the second largest islandof china, continent area ofwhich is 35, 000 sqkm,covering over 2 million sqkm ofmarine space. Thepopulation ofHainan is 8. 2 million. Haikou is thecapital city ofHainan. In 1999, Hainan started tobuild itself into a reputed by vacationers from homeand abroad in general as an island ofhealth, ecolo-gy and holidays.

分析:⑴-based在此处多余;⑵china(中国)首字母应大写, 23, 80C.应为23. 8℃,属拼写错误;⑶continent可特指欧洲大陆,此处的“陆地面积”应为land area,“海洋面积”为sea area,并且这一部分根据英语特点,可用重组法,使逻辑更为清晰;⑷a reputed后信息缺失,“被誉为”常译为be hailed as; (5)从“海南自然环境一流”到“度假岛”可用合并法译成一句,同时“健康岛、生态岛、安全岛、度假岛”是本段的总结也是点睛之笔,可用拆译法分开翻译以凸显其特色。